Category Archives: Opinion
About This Writing Stuff…
This month, book consultant and developmental editor Mary Kole encourages writers to diversify their skills in the age of AI. Now that self-publishing is no longer a “new thing,” Anne R. Allen advises indie writers on how to keep expectations grounded.
Kristen Lamb reviews the Johari Window and how it can be used as a tool for character and story development. Over at the Write Practice, Joe Bunting gives us a detailed lesson on first and third person points of view.
Fantasy writer Philip Athans defends the adverb—with some caveats—and, along with PJ Parrish, provides guidance on the skillful use of description in narrative.
All that and much more. Enjoy!
The Irrelevance of the Modern Writer by Mary Kole & Good Story Company
The Über Skill for Writers by Tiffany Yates Martin
How to Write the Beginning of a Novel by Rhiannon Richardson
How to Tighten Your Midpoint Twist by Ley Taylor Johnson
Is an Unpublishable Book Worth Writing? by Lory Widmer Hess
Is Self-Publishing a Good Choice for Authors in 2024? by Anne R. Allen
Adverbs Are Fine! by Philip Athans
Describe Characters as You Go Along by Philip Athans
How Much Description Does Your Book Need? by PJ Parrish
The Johari Window & Character Blind Spots by Kristen Lamb
How to Get Your Plot Arcs Working Together by Chris Winkle
Ninety-Nine Words to Seek and Destroy by Chris Winkle
Fresh Perspective Sells by Kathryn Craft
Types of Point of View: The Ultimate Guide to First Person & Third Person POV by Joe Bunting
The Healing Power of the Written Word
Regardless of genre, several of my stories present a protagonist forced to confront repressed pain in order to overcome it and move on. As its heart, Testing the Prisoner is about the trauma suffered by victims of child abuse and the emotional damage they carry into adulthood.
I’ve been told by more than one reader that the book has aided in their healing process and for that, I cannot be more grateful. Most recently, fellow horror writer Carson Buckingham opened up about her experiences in her review of Testing the Prisoner on Hellnotes, a horror review site.
“I think the reason this book is so easy to get into and easier to continue with is the fact that the plot highlights the trauma, psychological chaos, and human feet of clay that makes it so relatable, even though it is about child abuse and letting go of hatred toward the abusers. Being a victim myself, though initially bothered by similarities to my childhood through some strongly-written abuse scenes, I stayed with it and am happy to report that this book turned out to be one of the most uplifting novels I have read in a very long time. If you have been a victim, it might do you good to read it. I found that, after I did, I was able to let go of a large negative burden that I’d been carrying for years… so thank you, Mr. Giunta. For your writing to be able to do that—to cause readers to step back and take inventory of their own lives and to improve them by acting on what they see is nothing short of miraculous.”
You’re welcome, my friend.
You Didn’t Come This Far Only to Come This Far
Despite recent bouts of COVID, depression, and elevated stress, I had occasion over this holiday season to reflect on everything for which I’m grateful, and the list is long.
Yes, 2023 was a challenging year. I struggled with severe anxiety attacks that began in September 2022 and continued until mid-August 2023. They left me debilitated for the first hour or two every morning and were often accompanied by bouts of depression, some lasting weeks. There were days when I thought they would end me, but I live by two mottos: “life might knock me down, but it can’t keep me down” and “you didn’t come this far only to come this far.”
I’ve been grappling with the demons of depression and anxiety for over 45 years. For most of that time, I’ve been alone in my fight, but on this occasion, I had the help of three amazing women—my wife, my therapist, and my favorite singer on the planet, Dido (never say music doesn’t heal a broken soul). They are all my heroes.
My wife planned and booked every step of our June trip to Niagara Falls and the Thousand Islands, culminating in a visit to Boldt Castle on my birthday. It was a fantastic week. Travel does wonders for mental health.
It was also in June when my detective tale, “Pearl of Great Price,” was published in Hard-Boiled and Loaded with Sin by Hawkshaw Press. That also helped loosen anxiety’s grip on me.
At the same time, plans to release the second edition of Testing the Prisoner were coming to fruition. By early June, the book was fully re-edited by yours truly and two months later, artist pal Scott Barnett produced a cover that not only popped but exploded.
The book was released on September 18th. What happened next was nothing short of amazing.
First, I ran an Early Reviewers giveaway on LibraryThing, which resulted in five stellar reviews from the happy winners.
In October, after purchasing a copy of Testing the Prisoner from my table at the Easton Book Festival, writer and publisher Angel Ackerman—current president of the Greater Lehigh Valley Writers Group—praised the book on her blog as well as Amazon and Goodreads. By this time, Testing the Prisoner had been named as one of five finalists in American Book Fest’s 2023 Best Book Awards (Horror Category). Wow!
I was then contacted by horror writer Carson Buckingham who offered to review the book for Hellnotes.com. I sent a paperback to her in mid-November and shortly after Thanksgiving, she posted her effusive review, giving Testing the Prisoner six out of five stars!
As of this writing, I’m on the final round of re-edits to By Your Side, the second edition of which is slated for release on February 5, 2024 with a new cover by the aforementioned brilliant artist, Scott Barnett. The official launch will happen at Farpoint SF Convention in Pikesville, MD.
As I sit here on December 23rd, the house decked out for Christmas, anticipating a glorious week off from work and all of the writing and editing ahead of me, I do indeed have plenty to be grateful for. I hope you do as well. If you’re struggling, remember that you didn’t come this far, only to come this far. Life will knock you down at times, but problems and setback are temporary. Please don’t let them keep you down.
I wish you peace, love, and joy this holiday season and throughout the new year!
Best Books About Ordinary People Thrown into Bizarre and Extraordinary Circumstances
There’s a new book recommendation site in town and its name is Shepherd. They aim to give Goodreads a run for its money and to help build their site, Shepherd has been reaching out to authors for their top five book recommendations based on a theme of their choice.
In my case, I created a list of the best books about ordinary people thrown into bizarre and extraordinary circumstances. It’s an honor to be featured on Shepherd and join the ranks of so many incredible writers!
About This Writing Stuff…
This month, Philip Athans explores the concept of originality in fiction while Chris Winkle shows us how we can effectively suspend disbelief in our readers.
Kristen Lamb explains the benefits of book reviews to an author’s career (seriously, I could always use more!) while Garry Rogers illustrates how the Feynman Learning Technique can help us with plotting.
At Writer Unboxed, the inimitable Kathryn Craft delves into vulnerability while Desmond Hall discusses suspense at the story and sentence level.
All that and much more. Enjoy!
How to Write a Ghost Story by Amy Holland
Desmond Drops: Suspense from the Beginning, Suspense in the Middle, and Suspense at the Sentence Level by Desmond Hall
How to Plan a Successful Book Launch in 10 Steps by Geri Mileva
The Importance of Tone in Writing by Anne R. Allen
On “On Originality” by Haruki Murakami by Philip Athans
7 Ways to Access Vulnerability by Kathryn Craft
“Can’t Put the Book Down” by Dale Ivan Smith
Plot Your Story Using the Feynman Learning Technique by Garry Rodgers
Book Reviews: Why They Matter So Much by Kristen Lamb
Audiences Don’t Suspend Disbelief – We Do it for Them by Chris Winkle
Print-on-Demand Publishing? KDF vs IngramSpark: One Author’s Experience by Paul Benjamin
NEA Finds Worrying Drop in Reading Participation by Jim Milliot
How Has Big Publishing Changed American Fiction? by Kevin Lozano






